The Cotton Fields’ Keeper
A Dark Night in Georgia

The Cotton Fields’ Keeper

A Dark Night in Georgia A Dark Night in Georgia

 

The Cotton Fields’ Keeper

The farmhouse stood quiet, a shell of what once was—a cotton farm, alive and thriving. Now it slouched against the backdrop of bare trees and endless rows of dead stalks. The land lay abandoned, left to rot under debts and despair. The few who still spoke of it did so in hushed tones. They said something remained in that house. Something old. Something patient.

On this winter’s night, the air was too cold, a wind cutting with the smell of mildew and rotting cotton. The moon is just above the horizon, a pale eye peeking out from behind clouds, spilling its light over the old farmhouse. Inside, it was thick with darkness. The house breathed—creaks in the wood, groans of the floor, and a faint tapping somewhere unseen.

Sarah Grayson had heard the stories. She was twenty, a college dropout, back in her small South Georgia hometown out of necessity. The tales called to her. The last family had vanished. The fields never grew right again. The land carried a curse. To her, it was an escape from the dullness of her life, a place where past and present whispered and blurred.

She arrived just before midnight, a flashlight in hand and a camera slung across her shoulder. The wind howled as she walked to the front door, peeling paint catching the faint light. The porch steps sagged under her weight, a warning groan. After a moment, she pushed the door open.

Inside, the air was colder, filled with the scent of decay. The flashlight’s faint beam caught the foyer, the floor stained and littered with debris. A staircase leaned into the shadows on her left. On her right, a parlor awaited, dust-covered furniture under torn sheets.

Then she heard it again—the tapping—faint and deliberate, coming from upstairs.

Sarah froze. She had braced for silence, for the eerie stillness of abandonment. But this? Her heart quickened. She swallowed hard and stepped deeper into the house.

“Hello?” she called out. Her voice trembled and echoed down the hallway, swallowed by the void. It had to be an animal—maybe a raccoon or possum. Something real. Logical.

In the kitchen, rusted appliances lined the walls, and the ceiling sagged. On the table sat a glass jar, its contents obscured by grime. The tapping grew louder, now joined by a whisper.

“The Keeper watches…”

The words crawled across her skin like cold fingers. She turned toward the staircase. Against her better judgment, she climbed, each step groaning beneath her. The flashlight flickered as her hands shook, illuminating the faded wallpaper and tarnished brass of an old chandelier.

At the top, the air weighed down on her, and the tapping stopped.

The hallway stretched ahead, closed doors lining the walls. She hesitated, the feeling of being watched pressing in on her. The whispers came back, louder, intertwining.

“Feed the soil… Feed the Keeper…”

Her flashlight flickered again. In the brief darkness, she thought she saw movement—a shadow darting down the hall. She swung the light toward it, but it was gone.

“Hello?” she called again, her voice breaking. “If someone’s here, this isn’t funny.”

The door at the end of the hall creaked open.

Her breath caught. The light inside was dim, a glow spilling into the corridor. Slowly, she approached the doorway.

The room held nothing but a single chair in the center. A bundle of cotton sat upon it, tied with frayed twine. It pulsed softly with light. She stepped closer, curiosity swallowing her fear, reaching out to touch it.

As her fingers brushed the cotton, the room exploded with sound. The whispers turned to screams, a cacophony of rage and pain. The floor trembled, and the walls closed in. She stumbled back, hands pressed to her ears, but it was too late.

The door slammed shut, and her flashlight went dark.

In the suffocating darkness, she felt it—the Keeper. An ancient presence filled the room, radiating cold and hunger. The whispers merged into a single low voice.

“You trespass. You disturb the soil. Now, you will feed it.”

Sarah screamed, but the sound was lost to the house. The last thing she saw was the cotton’s faint, pulsing light, ominous and hungry.

Ron Mayhew

Fine Art Photographer specializing in Still Life and Commercial Photography.

This Post Has 4 Comments

  1. Great story Ron, I’m glad I’m reading it as the sun rises rather than sets though. Maggie

    1. Ha! A little dark, isn’t it?
      Thanks for reading, Maggie

  2. Dear Ron
    We love these colours.
    Keep well
    The Fab Four of Cley
    🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

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